She Makes the Rain Better

[Cody Nash]

She Makes the Rain Better
By: Cry






Picture this..
I'm standin' in it when the rain "drip, drips!"
so it figures that I go insane, listenin'
to her name, which is listed in the top charts of my brain,
and I find composure from that is so hard to regain,
part of me's saying.. "stop doing what you do,
just quit staring at someone new for you to lose!"
but she knew.. she knew that I was doomed from the start,
and she still wanted something to do with my heart..
so we threw in a spark; it rained hard..
me thinking we'd be electrocuted was the lame part,
because praise God - the rain felt great,
and so I encouraged that the rain fell days,
months, even years; it's all good from today!
and it could make part of the news good for a change,
I look for embrace - and in an awfully funny format,
the weatherman's wrong on every sunny forcast,
cliche' as a welcoming floormat, but so natural it hurts,
natural as if we were formed from an actual birth.


Then today..
I opened my Jones at about 9 to 3:00,
cracked open that lid and it said to "Climb a Tree"
and I said that's fine for me, just so long as she's on top,
but can I bring a mask in case she sees I'm lost?
it'll be my fault, but at least she won't spy
that my medals are slightly off and I'm not a gold guy,
and stop it, oh my! those compliments are nice..
but for once in my life, I find when she's honest it's a lie.
I'm not what she thinks.. we love and hardly know
about what makes us love - man, aren't we slow?
and that sparkling glow returns, so I'm left upcasting
which in turn, makes my current girlfriend unhappy,
even she once had me, but I love too much..
throwing a hook back out; "the one you touched."




So picture this..
I have a girlfriend, who I'm delighted's with me,
then I have girl friend who I get more excited to see!
and when in the rain she's that lightnin', it seems
I can climb rain drops and get hang time in the streets,
the silver lining in me - she brings out my best,
but also the worst in the pit of my chest..
won't give into what's left, I'll be hurtin' none!
this is the one thing I never learned in love -
with my current one I ruin great sweaters,
and she.. she makes the rain better.









peace..

[Cody Nash]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...le-393715.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ah-393050.html

[Kizmit_TUC]

DEF good shit, I was really feeling this piece. Kinda reminds me of my relationships going on lol good shit Cry

RTF

[_Lyrics]

LMAO, tight shit, flow wise this shit is better than most pieces, but what had me was the connection and the ending verse. a girlfriend is always really commitment and a lot of the time when fights and arguements start, it feels like a rainy day and its good to bounce back to my girl friend so she can make the rain better. haha. metaphors in the last verse was nice, when you said she was your lightning to hang time in the street. pretty dope drop, stay up cry.

[country]

part of me's saying.. "stop doing what you do,
just quit staring at someone new for you to lose!"
but she knew.. she knew that I was doomed from the start,
and she still wanted something to do with my heart..

thats is so classic

I'm not what she thinks.. we love and hardly know
about what makes us love - man, aren't we slow?

thats so fuckin raw to


this has got to be my fav piece from you so far

this was just nasty man

[Nazgul]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...lf-393659.html

hit that.


nice piece man. the flow was on point.. the content was nice. you had alot of lines I was feelin man. the rain n shit you used as a metaphor, you stayed on topic n it was a cool little story. definately worth the read.. if you need anyone to collab with sometime pm me. stay up man.

[Cody Nash]

thanks all. I'll hit links later.

[Cody Nash]

yeah.

[Cody Nash]

little more feed?

[Cody Nash]

a little more love come on..

[Futura Dust]

So picture this..
I have a girlfriend, who I'm delighted's with me,
then I have girl friend who I get more excited to see!
and when in the rain she's that lightnin', it seems
I can climb rain drops and get hang time in the streets,
the silver lining in me - she brings out my best,
but also the worst in the pit of my chest..
won't give into what's left, I'll be hurtin' none!
this is the one thing I never learned in love -
with my current one I ruin great sweaters,
and she.. she makes the rain better.

This was cool....to me its like you were saying the one that gives you problems is the one you like more cause she gives you excitement and Rain is not a concept that detours you from enjoying nature....so the Title of the piece throws the reader for a loop before he/she....even reads 1 word.

[Cody Nash]

you got it! dope, thanks.